the end of an affair
The End of an Affair.I walked to town wanted to give you a posy of roses,It was late afternoon in June and the florist was shut.The fuzz wouldn't let me pick flowers in the park, soI had two drinks in...
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Very well-written... Intriguing.Loved the imagery in these lines:"It now decorate a sad wall which tries to fool the world By being painted pink in a room where lust and disgustIntermingle..."
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I think the linebreaks need a bit of work, but I like the original style of the piece Why don't you visit -All in a pen
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Nice piece jan. Thank youChris Dulcet Muses Lives! Discipline divorced from wisdom is not true discipline, but merely the meaningless following of custom, which is only a disguise for...
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I had two drinks in the bar, both of them for you, Since I don't drink anymore.That part is awesome. I really like this poem its a nice easy read with a nice flowJana@buttercup.i-p.comI Should be the...
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